Hey everyone! I’m building my first digital product and working on communicating the offer clearly before launching. I’m not looking to promote anything or get compliments. I’d genuinely appreciate some honest feedback on whether the offer makes sense to someone seeing it for the first time. Here’s my offer: “If you keep planning a different life but don’t know where to start, The Becoming Blueprint launches November 16 with a guided life audit, a 90-day action planner, and a weekly progress tracker to help you turn one priority into three clear steps for the week.” I’d love your feedback on four things: 1. The problem: Who do you think this is for, and what problem do you think I’m trying to solve? Does the wording make sense? The outcome: After reading this, can you clearly picture what someone will be able to do with the product? What result are you expecting? The mechanism: Do you understand how the product is supposed to help someone get that result, or is something missing or confusing? The offer itself: Based on that one sentence, what do you think you’re actually getting? Is the value clear enough that you could see yourself considering it, or would you need more information first? Please don’t worry about being too critical. If something sounds vague, generic, confusing, or makes you ask “Okay, but what does that actually mean?”, I’d really like to know. I’m especially interested in what you understood before I explain anything else, because that’s the whole point of this exercise. Thank you!   submitted by   /u/hans2580 [link]   [comments]