Hi, I am a student worker for my college's marketing director, and we are patronizing an agency to create webcopies for us to use as we update our website. I've had a good read through of the webcopies, and while it is forward and straight to the point, it has that generic, loveless quality of writing to it, that to me is more of a stale turn-off than a call to action in generating interest. It's been assigned to me to try and make some edits to make it feel more natural and humanistic. I guess I'm just curious if any benefit is being served here to my college, or if rather it'd be just as well to just ask AI ourselves to generate such material. Thanks :) I'll provide a couple redacted samples below as an example... H2: Technology majors built for the career you want Your education is more than just lectures — it’s an investment in your career. When you choose [college], you gain unique advantages that fast-track you to professional success: A prestigious degree: Graduate with a highly respected degree from the [eminent university], recognized globally for excellence. Small classes, big opportunities: Learn directly from world-class faculty with deep industry experience who know your name — not your student ID. Project-based learning: You'll build applications that actually work, collaborate with teams on semester-long projects, present your work to technical and non-technical audiences, and iterate based on feedback and testing. The projects you complete become portfolio pieces that demonstrate your abilities to potential employers. Real-world experience: Participate in internships, conduct cutting-edge research, work on industry-sponsored capstone projects and secure internships with our extensive network of industry partners. State-of-the-art facilities: Learn in our [college] Complex with cutting-edge labs, collaborative workspaces and the same professional tools you'll use in your career. And one more for good measure.. H2: Explore hands-on tech programs that lead to high-demand careers The [college] offers programs designed to grow the practical competencies necessary to excel in high-demand fields. Undergraduate [college] majors provide the essential foundation, while our master’s and doctoral degree programs help you specialize or advance into leadership. We also support accelerated learning through joint BS/MS options and facilitate targeted skill enhancement via flexible certificates and professional development courses. What’s more, embedded in each of [college]’s programs is a deep-rooted mission to drive economic growth in [city], [county] and across [state] to help build a sustainable, next-generation community. From your first class to your final degree, [college] is committed to connecting you with the most innovative programs that lead directly to professional success.   submitted by   /u/psrE353 [link]   [comments]