Hey guys, I need some feedback on the landing page copy for an app called Elevist. (quick side note: what do you actually think of the name Elevist?). Basically most productivity apps like Notion or Asana are just passive list repositories. you put your tasks in and they just sit there causing task debt. Elevist is an AI execution system that connects your long-term goals, metrics, tasks, habits, and notes into one single workspace. ...and to be clear, this is not just another LLM wrapper. we are actually running math decision theory and behavioural science metrics (I have a PhD. in AI) in the background to model your state. it uses your full context so the advice is deeply personalised to how you actually work. Here is how the loop works: Define: you set a goal and the AI deconstructs it into hard metrics. Prioritize: it sorts your tasks by leverage. highlights the $1,000/hr strategic drivers and flags the $10/hr admin stuff as "fake work". Daily Focus: instead of staring at a massive backlog, the AI builds your specific plan for today so you know exactly what to execute right now. Weekly Review: every 7 days it forces a strict audit. it compares your actual reality against your goals to show you exactly what worked, and then tells you how to adjust your plan for Monday. It's built specifically for founders, executives, and high-output generalists. since pricing will be around $49 to $99 a month, the copy really needs to communicate that it's an active system, not just another basic to-do list. Here is the exact text for the hero section. rip it apart. [ H1 ] Turn your goals into daily execution. [ Eyebrow ] Not another AI to-do list. [ Sub ] Plan your day. Kill the fake work. Every week, AI reviews your progress, finds what's working, and improves your plan for next week. [ CTA ] Request Early Access Context note: right below the CTA, there is a narrated product tour video that starts playing automatically so they immediately see the app in action. Specific feedback I'm looking for: - does the copy make it sound like an active execution system that actually guides you, or does it still sound like a passive tracker? - does the "kill the fake work" hook land for you or is it too aggressive? - does it justify a premium vibe? Thank you in advance   submitted by   /u/markoruman [link]   [comments]