The reviewer told my writing is too long and boring: (this was for a post) From the first post-independent administration to the present governance, India has been struggling to find its position in the manufacturing sector. The closed economy following independence, the growth in the 1990s, to the Make in India initiative of the past decade, the long-term goal to boost the sector still remains unachieved. How do I improve? I will add the hashtags and cta but wanna know what's wrong with these three sentences.   submitted by   /u/Intelligent-Race-809 [link]   [comments]