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Go ahead rip me to pieces. This is an ad for GIR a company that sells kitchen tools. Also did I do too much considering the products are some whisks and spatulas? [Headline] Frustrated with unreliable kitchen tools? GIR will end that for good [Primary text] Your family's arriving in 2 hours for the big gathering. The table's made, the dinner's smelling good, only your famous brownies left to finish... ...but as you're mixing the batter your spatula decides to start falling apart. And now you're frantically searching the kitchen drawers for another one, but no luck. You worked all day and you're tired and this CAN'T BE HAPPENING RIGHT NOW. It's okay I've been there and that's why I want you to meet GIR, because with our kitchen tools this won't happen ever again. Our kitchen tools are made with your struggles in mind. That's why they're reliable, long-lasting, precise, and eco-friendly. But most importantly they will never let you down when you need them the most. Let your kitchen tools work for you instead of against you and cooking will once again be the stress-free hobby you fell in love with. Shop GIR now >>>   submitted by   /u/darklinalover2307 [link]   [comments]